#1
It’s been awhile since you made me cry.
Drinking water like its whisky babe all night.
Wipe the tears from my eyes.
On a count of this moment you showed a light.

Again and again, again and again.

Oh on a count of that moment you showed a light.

Hear the voice inside.
Know I heard you all my life. .
An out of body surprise.
On a count of that moment you showed a light.
Again and again, again and again

While you leave me asleep at night


#3
Hey 58 of you viewed my post on this forum. I want to see what you have to bring to the table. Thanks.

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#4
I was kind of confused with "on a count of" I think it should be on account of instead. That way makes more sense to me at least. Although if you like it how it is that is fine.
And everything that once was
infinitely far
and unsayable is now
unsayable
and right here in the room.


- Franz Wright
#5
yeah the "on a count of" threw me off a bit but I thought it might have just been your artistic choice to write it that way I really enjoyed reading this though and I think it would make a very cool song.
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