#2
The vocals sound a little bit off as in they don't seem to harmonize with the guitar part. It may be because you are nervous which is throwing you off a bit (that's what happened to me when I first started recording!). So yeah I would say to work on the vocals a little bit more but that's just my opinion.

Also if you post this in the recording section of the forums you may get more responses.
And everything that once was
infinitely far
and unsayable is now
unsayable
and right here in the room.


- Franz Wright
#3
hey thanks man (or girl) ill try and make it better on the next ones haha, did you look at my other stuff? if so, was there the same problem there?
#4
The problem was in some of the other songs but not as much.
And everything that once was
infinitely far
and unsayable is now
unsayable
and right here in the room.


- Franz Wright