#2
Yo dude,

Pretty ballsy cool track. Tone of rhythm gutars was cool especially, would be cool as with vocals. The clean bit is probably my favourite. When solo comes in the solo guitar is almost overpowered by the rhythm. Still audible, but its a little bit to the back of the mix. The soloing was nice and articulated though.

Cool track that would benefit heaps from vocals

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1677368
#5
Lovely tonality. Enjoy the way it flows seemlessly into the clean part then builds back up again.

Phrasing of riffs work pretty well. drums are fine. Perhaps in the quite part, use rim shots rather than snare hits? The two lead parts, the clean part was excellent, along with the distorted part being phrased quite well, but I think something more melodic might of worked better.

You are really good at pinch harmonic's it must be said. Absolutely banging riff at 4:30! that little bridge thing works well in there as well.

Really impressive stuff and produced pretty darn well.

C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1677582