Hey man,

I'm definitely not a video production expert or anything, but I'd say this is a decent first attempt, and certainly better than what I'd probably be able to do. Are you using a GoPro? The track was pretty enjoyable too. There are some pretty sick riffs in here. The vocal style reminds me a little bit of Randy Blythe. The solo at 3:25 was very cool.

Could you check out my track "Where Is Everybody?" https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1678177
Thank you for giving such a positive response! The whole thing was shot with a GoPro 4 Silver with a few different mounts. This was the first song we ever wrote as a band, so i'm really glad you liked it!
I'll definitely check out your music and give you my opinion