#2
logic,
Nice lead guitar playing on the first lead. Some of the rhythm guitar could be closer in time with the drums. Did you use compression, E-bow, Sustainiac, or ? on the long sustaining lead at the end (that was cool)? Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1677541
Last edited by aaron aardvark at May 28, 2015,
#3
Guitar resonator by Vibesware on the last part. My stuff could always be tighter, lol. I compose, lay down the tracks and move on. I've never been one to spend huge amounts of time on stuff... my weakness :-)
#4
Hello fellow Canadian!

Nice jam you have here, the leads are great on it and keep it interesting. Sometimes the music backing the leads could be a little tighter. Interesting transition into the slower pace piano section around 2:35 too. I feel like instead of a fade out into it, you can connect it somehow so it doesn't just happen out of the blue. Cool stuff man!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1677839
#5
Hello.

This has a nice feel to it. I really like you lead tone and the licks are cool. As was said above, he rhythm parts are kinda out of time in places which sort of detracts from the groove quite a bit. I wasnt sure if I heard a synth in there somewhere at one point around 1:20 and 1:40 - if so it could do with being higher in the mix.

The end part was cool - the long sustained notes sounded sweet and created a nice atmosphere - it almost sounded like a theramin at some points.

If you fancy some C4C - heres me https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1677842

Cheers