I took your feedback from my last video UG and I think I was able to make my next video a lot better.
Some of the feedback from my last video
Greasy low ends, little highends, excessive clipping, lackluster mixing, over compressed.

I tightened up the low end. I did not eq the symbals on the drums as much to keep the high ends in there.
I tried to use as little compression as I felt so I could still just hear a punchyness in the track.
I paid more attention to the clipping issue and I think it is improved.
But we shall see
Any other feedback is always awesome. :-)
However, recording feedback, not guitar feedback please.