At first I thought that the "slapback" was weird, but I actually like it. And you just keep making beautiful songs, I could get lost in the atmosphere of this song even though it's basically a cover. The phaser at about 1:10 is a bit unexpected but it moves the track nicely. It might not be a part for everyone but I thought it was pretty cool. You need to get some proper recording equipment, you could make one hell of an album if you'd record these more professionally.