#1
I thought I had found her
well
I found something
at least
not that it makes me any less drunk
or any less unhappy

wasted talent
that's all I found



edit: how's this color, hippie ?
Last edited by greyeyedfire at Jun 11, 2015,
#3
this concept is great, what you're grasping for in the piece, but it falls flat in its brevity and casualness. i would've liked greater detail and development.