#1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TyCxk8hRWO0

I wrote this song when I was about to go through a breakup and how it feels. I was confused and young, so this song represents myself on those days.
#2
I'm not even going to pretend that I like hip hop, I really don't enjoy the style, but I'll try to give some objective criticism.

The track has a really nice and chill atmosphere, if this was an instrumental I could definitely just relax with this. The production quality and the all of the sounds are really nice, I especially like the slide guitar-esque sounds at about 2:20.

I'm going to leave the criticism about lyrics to someone else, I rarely listen to music with similar subject matters so I really can't say anything about them. I think that everything flowed well and nothing bothered me at all.

About the vocals, I feel like for the majority of the track they're very shy, I feel like it's intentional, but some parts do sound a bit like they weren't practiced enough. However since the bangla verse doesn't have this problem I'm pretty certain that it is as you intended.

I can't say that I like it that much since I don't like hip-hop, but I have to say that I enjoyed it and got pretty immersed in it for what it's worth. Definitely a professional sounding track.
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#3
Hi mate I really like this track, the best part of this is that lead guitar its so eerie but feels ice cold. Great beat and I feel it has a nice fresh feel to the whole production. Vocals are pretty nice too and suit. the whole thing flows nicely so I don't think you need to change anything imo please C4C my track here https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1679688
#4
Quote by Kevätuhri
I'm not even going to pretend that I like hip hop, I really don't enjoy the style, but I'll try to give some objective criticism.

The track has a really nice and chill atmosphere, if this was an instrumental I could definitely just relax with this. The production quality and the all of the sounds are really nice, I especially like the slide guitar-esque sounds at about 2:20.

I'm going to leave the criticism about lyrics to someone else, I rarely listen to music with similar subject matters so I really can't say anything about them. I think that everything flowed well and nothing bothered me at all.

About the vocals, I feel like for the majority of the track they're very shy, I feel like it's intentional, but some parts do sound a bit like they weren't practiced enough. However since the bangla verse doesn't have this problem I'm pretty certain that it is as you intended.

I can't say that I like it that much since I don't like hip-hop, but I have to say that I enjoyed it and got pretty immersed in it for what it's worth. Definitely a professional sounding track.


Thanks Kevätuhri! That indeed was a slide guitar. I've used Guitar Pro as an fx with FL Studio as the DAW. I kept my voice a bit suppressed because the two voices at the same time were clashing (something called "comb filter", you can hear it in the 2nd verse). I'm still new so there are a lot of kinks and quirks. Thanks again for checking it out
#5
Quote by heaven086
Hi mate I really like this track, the best part of this is that lead guitar its so eerie but feels ice cold. Great beat and I feel it has a nice fresh feel to the whole production. Vocals are pretty nice too and suit. the whole thing flows nicely so I don't think you need to change anything imo please C4C my track here https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1679688


Thank you so much, heaven086! "Walk on By" is your own song, right? I felt a 70's Bob Dylan sound to it but I like it a lot. Very easy-listening and the lush reverb on the vocal somehow suited the song (usually I don't like too much reverb on vocals). The change at 1:35 is really awesome! It's gonna sound even better with good recording and maybe some light harmonies with the lead vocal.