#2
Like you said, pretty simple but its all functionally usable. Not my genre, but as a music critic, its a pretty decent song.

One point to work on? It needs to breathe a bit. It's chords and riffs all the time, needs a bit of space, perhaps just making the chord riffs a bit more rhythmical.

Did an example, go to bar 17.
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D major.Song13bar17.gp5
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#3
yeah, will be adding more stuff like that too it. will show my "students" this so they can learn. thanks for the listen.
#4
Riffs seem solid, but I do have to agree, needs a bit of diversity. The chords stay on the same 8 count for the first 79 bars. Could definitely do for some varying rhythmic sections whenever you get your "students" up to level.