#1
Hi all this is one of my songs that I've been writing for a short time, its an acoustic version so far, I will eventually take this into a studio! Obviously its not mixed or mastered to any sort of professional degree Please leave me some feedback and I will happily do the same to any of your tracks

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G4Izh-YckFM
#2
hey hey hey !

I listened to your track. First of all, it was good in general =)
I'm not very good in English so I will not crit the lyrics hahaha. I like the feeling I had when i listened to your song, it's between sadness and tranquillity or both.
The guitar's tone is good for me and your playing too. The vocals were good too but I found a bit strange at first, maybe you added some effects into the vocals. After that, I just let myself into the song and it was ok haha

Finally it has potential, maybe adding arrangements, drums, ... or leave it like this (even if for a 4 minutes song, I think it would be better to have more changes, but that's only my taste^^)

Anyway, good job =)

you can review my song here
Orphenae - Pray the lord of chickens !

Cheers !
#3
Quote by pierrejo
hey hey hey !

I listened to your track. First of all, it was good in general =)
I'm not very good in English so I will not crit the lyrics hahaha. I like the feeling I had when i listened to your song, it's between sadness and tranquillity or both.
The guitar's tone is good for me and your playing too. The vocals were good too but I found a bit strange at first, maybe you added some effects into the vocals. After that, I just let myself into the song and it was ok haha

Finally it has potential, maybe adding arrangements, drums, ... or leave it like this (even if for a 4 minutes song, I think it would be better to have more changes, but that's only my taste^^)

Anyway, good job =)

you can review my song here
Orphenae - Pray the lord of chickens !

Cheers !

Hi mate, about your vocal comment, I've double up my vocals with a warm vocal FX on it so that's why it might sound a tad strange, I defiantly see what you mean though so thanks for that, as soon as I take this in to the studio though and record it professionally ill make sure everything is sorted, and ill add variety with lead parts and backing vocals etc
#5
Not the type of music that I'd normally listen to but it's pretty nice. It does get a bit repetetive after a while since the guitar plays the same rhythm through almost the entire song. I'd suggest that you try to change upt the rhythm a bit, using the same basic structure and feel but keeping it calm and simple for the verse and a bit more busy and energetic for the chorus.

Would love it if you'd check out this instrumental piece I finished recently. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=33493375#post33493375