#1
Hello

Look up at starry eyes, on a moonlit night,
With my back against the top of the world,
A reunion smile, and a Milky Way twirl,
We chase our dreams and then hunger for more

All these TV lives, framed in black and white,
Until we realise we breathe in shades of grey,
All the outs and ins, the betweens and what ifs,
The lies that bring truth out into the light,

It's a wonder that we're not sleeping anymore...

But I'm not shaking
The song's not playing,
I never felt like this before,
All these long sighs,
And these goodnights,
The hello that I was looking for,

The Poseidon sky and the cold dark night,
Backdrops the waterfall parade at the door,
I step outside into the pale moonlight,
Blind to the tears that fall to the ground once more,

She looks overseas, straight into my dreams,
Sees the commotion I've been searching for,
Her blue sky eyes and her two point smile,
Cushions my soul as it falls to the floor,

It's a wonder I'm not feeling anymore

And I stop shaking,
As the song stopped playing,
I never felt like this before,
All these long sighs,
The long goodnights,
The hello that I was looking for

It's no wonder we're not speaking anymore

As I start shaking,
My mind keeps playing,
I never felt like this before,
All our white lies,
In our short lives,
A hello is all I'm looking for,

It's no wonder that I won't see you anymore.
#2
I like this kind of a plot twist at the end, it is really smart you've done there. The only part I don't like is the second stanza, which I find pretty non-matching. It is just my opinion. The rest of it is surely a little "masterpiece"