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my girlfriend recently just moved to Kentucky, so i'll probably never see her again, its been hard, and i've just been writing these songs to cope. I wanna get a band together sometime and bring these songs to life with some real emotion. tell me what you think

Bullshit beneath my skin like the filth you people say to me
nothing is what I did, but sabotage like the terror

This shows the way you weave me
see, write the numbness sever
constrict this day, you scare me, we're moving forward
Drowning in filth and sorrow, that is not necessary
to binge or possess me

When you go I'll be here, while you watch me as I'm gone
And I know that I cannot take everything back to where it used to be

we're dying with our regrets
The days are heading oh so close to grieving ten-star merit
take cover, yeah right
If I am from what they really know
watching sin!

And I watch you as you breathe into feeling mean
And I shall pray to bite you good
You told me you were sorry and you know what's best for me
That you know what's best for me!!!

When you go I'll be here, while you watch me as i'm gone
And I know that I cannot take everything back to where it used to be

I can't i just die?
Why does that wench help me more?
it's always this way with you
the situation has entered some bad luck this way
But you couldn't let go cause you

When will you realize that I just don't care anymore?
cause I am beat and broken over something that doesn't even matter at all
I just don't care anymore
it's all about the cancer of the highest stakes!!

Nothing is what I did but sabotage like the terror
Wash your stain away since all you've got is sorrow and pain!!!
#3
Pretty decent poetry

This is just my opinion but I reckon it would go well in a heavy metal song. Genre Slipknot's Vermillion