Hey man,

I really liked your cover. My only critique would be to try and let notes ring out a little bit more, it'll make it sound more fluid and less choppy. You're on the right track though!

Also, if you could take a second to watch my cover, I'd be grateful. I'm definitely still a beginner, so any tips you have are greatly appreciated! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TwwbhsKIpRs