#2
heaven086,
The intro guitar riff reminds me of the Violent Femmes (good). I can't help wonder if some drums would help, and keep your timing tighter at times. I myself struggle with timing without drums or percussion. Singing & vocal melodies are quite good! I like the lead guitar tone & riffs. Sounds rather 60's to me. Cool song! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1682854
#3
Quote by aaron aardvark
heaven086,
The intro guitar riff reminds me of the Violent Femmes (good). I can't help wonder if some drums would help, and keep your timing tighter at times. I myself struggle with timing without drums or percussion. Singing & vocal melodies are quite good! I like the lead guitar tone & riffs. Sounds rather 60's to me. Cool song! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1682854

Thanks man, yeah that was my main issue timing! I only had a few runs through but just wanted to get an idea for lead. And yeah drums are coming as ill be taking this track into a recording studio so all timing issues etc will be sorted as I am now writing for my new band so I will be the drummer/songwriter haha