#2
You have some great phrasing here, as well as nice note choices. The faster parts that connected those interesting parts were pretty unimaginative, just straigth 16th note scale runs. But that was just for a few parts, overall I think that it was great, I really enjoyed it Skillful playing, creative note use and amazing phrasing, nice work.
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#4
I agree with everything Kevatuhri said, but I also have to say that you did a great job with the whole thing. I mean, a solo is supposed to "say something", in a way tell a story. I think you did that really well! Your technique is very good (dat phrasing, man), and it sounds very soulful! Good job!
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