https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3MMUA7ksKg0 I have previously posted this video a day ago in another section, but for ease of criticism I'll post it here again.
I was watching my video and thought (particularly the second chord in the video) my playing sounds shit. I guess it can't be rectified quickly, but can anyone give me some constructive criticism to improve my playing, e.g my hand is going up and down too much when strumming etc.

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