#1
To The Pit I travel
With anticipation do I go
Eager for the tension to unravel
Yet I arrive and find it isn't so

A thread of insecurity
A post of careful scrutiny
A sneer, a stab - this one's lonely - this one's sad
And everything this one says is oh so very trite
A politicking pestering pleb posturing as a cyber socialite

So where does this leave us?
Just what am I to do?
I pause for a moment, holding my blank stare
A thought then begins to manifest
Write my own thread my mind declares!

Oh how genius does this seem, this power I've now found
Through my own volition with cursor in position
I click and begin to write in prose not so becoming of my normal disposition

I continue through sheer desire, this feeling swells within
What have I discovered I wonder, my mind nearly caving in

The task proves too much, with each attempt I erase
Inspiration is what I now seek, for this post must display a particular mental physique.

For I am me and I am strong, or so I did believe

Or so I did believe...

Waves of sorrow overtake me, stark loneliness seeps in
Questions, questions - WHAT SHOULD I WRITE!?
I AM STRONG, THIS MUST DISPLAY MY MIGHT!
CAPS LOCK HAS TAKEN HOLD
A POEM SPREADS LIKE BLIGHT
AAAAH BUT THIS IS SHIT I SCREAM!
NO! THIS IS NOT OF MY INTENT
JUST HOW BADLY SHALL MY PEERS JUDGE ME
"GOD NO, NOT THEM!" I PLEAD!

My fear has swallowed me whole, what is left now is not much
Broken from within, my soul just barely clutches on
With what will I have left I begin to sing a troubled song

"Woe has taken me aboard
A ship so full of wh0res
But dead I am, the husk of a man
I haven't a penny to shop their store!"

"So leave me here
In this dark pit
A place for a broken man
I'll either find my self
Or find something else
In this pit for a broken man"
Last edited by wafflesyrup at Aug 23, 2015,
#3
too long, masturbated instead
Quote by SG_dave at #33549256
I've never wanted to see a guy eat dick so much in my life.
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If you are white, you are scum.
#5
oh holy shit man I didn't even notice that, I thought you posted tl;dr
Quote by SG_dave at #33549256
I've never wanted to see a guy eat dick so much in my life.
Quote by ali.guitarkid7 at #33553650
If you are white, you are scum.
#7
Quote by CL/\SH
oh holy shit man I didn't even notice that, I thought you posted tl;dr

I did. Ninja edit tho.
#9
I for one enjoyed it.

The "Re-incarnation of Plato" Award 2009
(most intelligent)
The "Good Samaritan" Award 2009 (most helpful)

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Who's Andy Timmons??
#11
I read the whole thing and to be honest it seems very true. And that ist really sad in my opinion. Also some replys OP got are not that great. Ex. The masturbation one.
#12
Quote by slapsymcdougal at #33563926
I did. Ninja edit tho.

that's some dark magic right there
Quote by SG_dave at #33549256
I've never wanted to see a guy eat dick so much in my life.
Quote by ali.guitarkid7 at #33553650
If you are white, you are scum.
#13
Quote by CL/\SH
that's some dark magic right there

Yea, it took the blood of 6 virgin pigeons.

I could have used about 20 total slags, though, but I have some standards.
#14
I liked it a lot
A poem.
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#15
nice
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