Wanted to try songwriting at its basic form so did the intro verse chorus verse chorus bridge chorus song. To make it interesting I tuned my guitar to open d# minor and this is the idea I came up with.

Thanks link is: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8qXmlIQxFXyNkV2TlRSWlB4R0U/view?usp=sharing lemme know what you think and i'll give you some input as well.

I know things can be easily recorded way better, right now I just wanted to see if you think it is a good song like do the melodic ideas seem to gel etc so i know if its something worth actually spending more time on and recording with better equipment in the future