#2
the midi bass sounds nice, looks real
did you played it in one shot per track ?
sometime it sounds strange cause of tuning a flaw or EQing, dont know, but with this title it's ok
without lirics it seems too long, why don't cut a verse and a chorus ?
played it all and liked afterall

return of critique would be enjoyed :
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1686573
CU