#1
Dunno why I covered this one but I figured as a Beatles classic cover I had to do it sooner or later heheh ... once I started doing it I realized it was far too repetitive .. at first I thought the down riff was every four cycles .. but when I listened closely I realized they only did that riff twice in the song, once after the solo and screaming, and another time just before the end .. ah well.. watcha think?
https://youtu.be/_-q6sy0AEKQ
#2
I like it, I would just work on improving your tone, maybe a bit of added bass