#2
The first one reminded me of Vektor, so that's awesome. I'd recommend looking into writing more varied drum patterns, as the ones you've get here are very mid tempo and kinda dull. Think of something like this (@1:23):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YQcMCrvVspQ
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