#3
Hey dude.

Good to see another track from you!

"Dangerous path ahead" is a melodious, exploratory track riddled with quick outbursts of technical riffing. I feel this is both a strength and a limitation of the track. Though I thoroughly enjoyed your playing, I didn't feel like the track had an opportunity to develop. As for the mix, your lead tone cuts through very well. I think the bass drum can be nudged down just a bit and maybe the levels on the snare turned up just a hair. Otherwise, I was able to hear the individual instrument voices clearly and articulately.

Here are some positions in the track that caught my attention:

0:11 The entrance of the lead here sounded a little abrupt and harsh.

1:21 I admire the stop-and-go approach you have at lead playing in this track.

2:10 The climax here was good, but I think the track could be extended more.

Overall this was a cool track. I feel like there are some good ideas and riffs here, but I feel the track would benefit from more structure.

could you please check out my track Cognitive Dissonance at https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1688755 ?
#5
Cool track man.

It comes off sounding like a varied composition but I take it this was improvised mostly? Anyway, the drums are nice and full on sounding and the lead guitar is nice and pronounced. I liked the chord you used at the beginning. I like the 'on-the-fly' vibe your lead playing has - some cool ideas in there. I could imagine a few more instruments complimenting this track nicely but it's good in its own merit. Play on and keep doing your thing.

If you're up for some C4C here's my track for you: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1688979
#6
Hi mate, I had actually liked this song on Soundcloud a few days ago before making the link to UG. So, in summary, I like it! The leads have a nice improvised feel and it gives the track a bit of unpredictability and keeps it interesting. My only minor comment is that the drums sound quite robotic so maybe try varying the volume of each beat a little?

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1688703