#1
You've been away from yourself

The day is over
It ended too fast
And what have you done
To be proud of yourself

You laid on the couch
Then went for a walk
You looked at the sky
Then stared at the floor

You've been away
From yourself for a long time
Please just return as the man
That I used to know

You asked for a coffee
You smoked your cigar
You smiled politely
At the aggression of time

I saw you there
On the outside
Of your soul
In the loneliest place
Last edited by Poetofaman at Oct 19, 2015,
#2
Because I am just a human and I have no idea what else I could say, I will only say that I truly like this piece. Quite simple, but still very metaphorical and full of different meanings.