#1
You were wiser than the prophets at their best
You saw a world reborn before it even died
I wish I could do the same for you,
always gone too soon
Now I hope to meet you again in the afterlife
You always called it foolishness,
but hope's all I have left
(if that's alright...)

Thanks for your time
from those you leave behind
You were stronger than I
You were wiser than I

A thousand times we burn but never see the light
I'm reborn, but with a broken heart
I'm a worn-out, bitter wreck
with nothing inside
If I can hold onto the memory of brighter days,
maybe I'll forgive the night
"I love you" means goodbye

Thanks for your time
from those you leave behind
You were stronger than I
You were wiser than I
Last edited by kindadumb at Oct 24, 2015,
#2
One of the best pieces I've read on that forum. Honestly. I especially like the repeating of"you were... than I"-great idea.
#5
This is really sad and quite lovely. I really like that "if I can hold onto the memory of brighter days, maybe I'll forgive the night." Nice job!