I enjoy the sounds and tones you use, everything sounds pretty cool. I think the rhythm is really awkward in a bad way though. I also wouldn't call this jazz nor metal, but it sure is electronic and progressive, at least in a way. It wasn't bad, it's a cool little song.
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