#1
Track title: Airless
Link to track: https://soundcloud.com/andresjam/andres-airless

Hey dudes!

I wrote a new track called "Airless"

I am still working on my vocals and I can use some improvement no doubt. I'd appreciate it if you guys could check this out and let me know what's on your mind about this track. All feedback is welcome.

Please leave a link to your track/forum post and I'll check out your work as well.

Thanks a ton
#2
Hey silva this is a cool track the lyrics are sadistic, sounds like it came right out of a barbaric sociopaths mouth which is awesome, I would try these lyrics with some growling or all growling. The tone on your guitar is not something you would hear on a dm track but it has a charming nice fuzz to it, could use more treble. I really liked the clean part starting at 1:20, the rhythm guitar riffs fit in very nice, and everything transitions very well especially in to that solo at 1:55 nice job with that solo it sounds very good id have it louder in the mix .

C4C- https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1689203
#4
Not my kind of music but I dig the vibe it gives off. Guitars are very unique sounding in the mix, not sure if that was intentional or not but I dig it. Good job man