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Hey man!

I like the stop-and-go groove at the beginning. The syncopated rhythms later on are pretty neat too. I'm digging your rhythm guitar tone. The bass section near the end of the track bumped! As far as the mix goes, I thought the cymbals could be bumped up a little. The high-hats sounded a bit on the thin side to me. The guitar section that starts in the higher register around 0:20 rings out very well. I thought the art pairing was appropriate. I'd definitely like to hear a full track. Right now, I feel this could serve pretty well as an interlude or extended breakdown.

Could you check out my track Airless at https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1689655 ?

Thanks for sharing your creation.

Peace!

P.S. that was v0ry dj0nt