#1
Track title: Don't Stand By Me (Drones Strike On Me)
Link to track: https://soundcloud.com/andresjam/andres-dont-stand-by-me-drones-strike-on-me

Hey dudes,

Here's the latest track from me: Don't Stand By Me (Drones Strike On Me)

As usual this is a mix of metal subgenres. I tried to give some 'heavier' vocals a try. I still have a long way to go, but I hope this track is enjoyable. The track title is a play on the classic "Stand By Me." It's a little bit of a dark spin

I appreciate any and all feedback and would be more than happy to check out your work as well. Please leave a link to your forum post or track.

Peace!
#2
It's actually a bit creepy for my taste. But sounds pretty cool. I also really like those vocals. So, keep going!
#3
I think the mix sounds a bit distant. I'm not sure if I think it's really cool or if I think it works against the track. Kind of up to you, do you like it?

I think the vocal style is pretty cool. You're still doing your "singing but not actually singing" style, and I think it works really well here. The track has an amazing atmosphere. It sounds horrifying, in a good way. Really cool track.
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#4
Thanks for checking out my most recent track silva. I think this might be one of my most favorite tracks I have heard from you, everything is really tightly played, and I do like the way its mixed. From 1:50 to 2:00 is my favorite part nice playing. The vocals are cool and fit I like the soft eerie whispering parts.
#5
I like the content of the song--the political awareness of it.

I'm not the biggest fan of the vocals but I like them best around 2:30. Song definitely had a creepy vibe, not sure how I feel about the triggered drum sound but maybe that's more of a programmed thing, I'm not familiar with programming drums. Sounds best when things are all around heavy?