Hi guys,

I wrote this song 100% by myself and in the recording, Im playing all the instruments.
I know its repetitive but its kinda supposed to be. Anyways, just like my other thread, I want to have constructive criticism on my songs before I put them on an album and play them as a band (In the future, when this is done, you'll be able to buy the songs on ITunes and listen to them on YouTube), but I want some feedback before I put everything up, plus I havent written enough songs yet, I am currently at 6, and I have recorded 2. Anyways, hope you enjoy.