I really liked the main/chorus melody vocal line, which suited your voice. I found the reverb on the vox a bit high when the song first started - but it worked for the chorus. Nice guitar playing in the middle part. Quite a long song noting that its not got a lot of variation throughout (ie, other instruments, etc). I think that would be the main thing for me - its a nice song, but would be nice to hear another version with more in (other instruments, etc) to give more variation/change.