I really love the sound of it!

The clean guitar parts sound great, especially when you begin to harmonize them. I can picture them sounding beautiful through some delay and maybe chorus to really get that shoegazey effect.

The "breakdown" section where the overdriven guitars contrast with the clean parts is possibly my favorite part of the song.

You definitely have a really good song here! Too bad this is from an old band; I would have loved to hear recorded version.
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