#2
bashajam,
Vocals are rather pitchy to be honest (especially in the beginning). I recommend Melodyne pitch correction. Guitar riffs are good though. I think the lyrics are rather good. I could picture Bob Dylan performing this (a compliment), his vocal delivery style is similar. The song itself is good. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=33759558#post33759558
Last edited by aaron aardvark at Jan 4, 2016,
#3
Nice song man, the guitar part is pretty damn good, I'm not a fan of the vocals though, they seem a bit off pitch in a few parts, the lyrics are really good though, I like the simplicity of the production with just the guitar, vocals and kick(?). Overall nice track man, I enjoyed it but again not a huge fan of the vocal style but that's just my opinion bro!

C4C?: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1694459