#2
Nice picking work here, I especially like the fill at :10 so far. Tone isn't my favorite, the distortion has kind of a brittle crunch to it it seems. Works better for the leads though, especially up the neck then for the power chords which end up getting a bit garbled. Face melting leads here though. The little theme that occurs at 1:59 and throughout does well to tie this piece together and serve as the guide that links all of these great moments in your playing together.

You can find my music at this link to c4c if you'd like
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1694526
#3
As said previously not a huge fan of tone but your playing is clean and it's a pretty cool improv. The harmony parts are especially awesome, the backing track got quite a bit jarring but it's only a backing track the emphasis is on your solo which again is fantastic, really well written and played very cleanly

Here's some of my music
C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1694459