#2
This is a nice simple arrangement that's a throwback in style. I think it would benefit from having a bass track to round out the mix. The arrangement is coherent and has good flow, but the mix itself is a little thin to me. I'm not able to right now, but I suspect if I turned this track up loud on speakers the amount of treble would be a bit harsh on the ears. Apt artwork to go along with the track that helps set the mood for the song. The lead guitar parts that come in to accompany the melody have a really nice tone and sense of space to them. I think you could bring them up in the mix just a little bit more and let them really shine. Thanks for sharing this track, it's a pleasure to listen to!

Looking forward to getting your feedback on my music here
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1694526