#3
nice rolling beat out of the gate, although it doesnt sound like its occupying the same space as the guitar riff. putting a subtle, matching reverb on both pieces could help tie them together. Very interesting lead tone through the lead section that's occuring at 1:10. much different vibe now, funky, playful, still a hint unsettling, but not as aggressive as the song started. coming back to that now at 2:10 and now im thinking maybe if this heavy guitar was a little quiter it would feel more balanced with the mix. the bass is difficult to hear behind it - if i wasnt wearing headphones i may not know it was there. pretty abrupt ending but a fun listen nonetheless. this track takes me on a journey that hops between two different places that on the surface seem quite different, and yet their juxtaposition tempts me to seek connections between them. enticing approach for sure.

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#4
444ever,
Sometimes the timing could be tighter. I like the synth/guitar-synth sound and riffs around 1:15. Some parts individually sound good to me, though it sounds like entirely different style songs put together on the same drum beat. Not to say I haven't put together some weird songs. Please review my music at this link:

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#5
The song starts off with a crazy gnarly guitar, which I really like but it doesn't really sound like the drum sound matches the guitar. The part from 0:38 fits the drums a lot more, but the change from the gnarly guitar to this one doesn't flow well. And that's basically the entire song; The individual parts sound great, but together it feels like a bit of a mess. One last thing to note is that it sounds like the ending was cut off- it suddenly stops right in the middle of a note! Was that intended?

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#6
The riff at the beginning hits you right in the face. Cool! Could maybe be a bit tighter, but I like feel of it.
I think it maybe would have been better to end the dirty riff with a chord that rung out instead of just fading it like you did. The transition to the clean part sounds a bit odd. That being said, I liked the clean/wah wah part. Groovy
The transition to the dirty part again was cool! Liked it. Cool harmonics too!

All in all, I think you have to tighten it up a bit to make it really groovy, but you are definitely on to something here.

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