#1
Knives and Glass

Ignore the small crack
No reason to patch this yet
I can live with that
We go on blind as we are
Is this ignorance really bliss
Or denying the growing rift

All that's done is reap division
Leaving all this broken
Past the point of no return

Ignore the seeping scars
While they tear you apart
Not a single drop of blood
When you died
I already shredded you
From the inside
My throat is from hell
The words become knives and glass

This is now a chasm
Throwing stones in vain
To fill a gap as this
Wander beside each other
And when it forks
How far will we go

All that's done is reap division
Leaving all this broken
Past the point of no return

Ignore the seeping scars
While they tear you apart
Not a single drop of blood
When you died
I already shredded you
From the inside
My throat is from hell
The words become knives and glass


How can I revive you
While all my skill is alienation
Wishing to undo everything
Return to you every last drop of blood
From every single word

All that's done is reap division
Leaving all this broken
Past the point of no return

Ignore the seeping scars
While they tear you apart
Not a single drop of blood
When you died
I already shredded you
From the inside
My throat is from hell
The words become knives and glass

Ignore the seeping scars
While they tear you apart
Not a single drop of blood
When you died
I already shredded you
From the inside
My throat is from hell
The words become knives and glass

Ignore the seeping scars
While they tear you apart
Not a single drop of blood
When you died
I already shredded you
From the inside
My throat is from hell
The words become knives and glass
Guitar/Bass:
Schecter: Damien 6/Stilletto Extreme 5, Squier: Bullet HSS*, Washburn RX10*/WG-587, Agile Septor 727
*mods

Amps/FX
Peavey: Vypyr 30/Max 112 (200W), ISP: Decimator

Quote by dannyalcatraz
Understood- I waste money on amps*, too.

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#2
There's a lot of potential here. The only thing that gets me is that there are a lot of themes that I would find a bit cliche. The "tear yourself a part" aesthetic that comes with "______ you from the inside" lyrics kind of make me feel like it's every other 'dark' piece that ends up being posted.

There's a way to use blood to make things visceral without just mentioning it. Put it in action. That would add a lot of depth.
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#4
It's about a relationship on the brink of collapse with one party seeing how they negatively contributed to the situation.
Guitar/Bass:
Schecter: Damien 6/Stilletto Extreme 5, Squier: Bullet HSS*, Washburn RX10*/WG-587, Agile Septor 727
*mods

Amps/FX
Peavey: Vypyr 30/Max 112 (200W), ISP: Decimator

Quote by dannyalcatraz
Understood- I waste money on amps*, too.

justinguitar.com is the answer