#1
finished this all this afternoon with a huge creativity burst. it's still missing a solo, but i'd love some suggestions

it's an odd mix of djent, power metal, and more (with a hidden surprise for some of my way-back homies/fans)

i'd love any input, but preferably detailed i'll return the favor
Attachments:
Around the corner.gp5
#2
This was fun to listen to. I really enjoy the harmonization and rhythm--very easy to bob your head to. My only real gripe with this particular piece is the very end. It doesn't have a sense of finality. Granted, it's unfinished. You're planning on fading out with effects, but I'm not entirely sure that a fade-out would be appropriate for this type of song. But that's just my opinion on the matter.

I made a quick, short solo for you that you could completely disregard if you don't think it fits. It took a little bit of time for me to think about it because the rhythm is so active. I thought that it would be best to try to lock into the triplet groove that's been established for the entire song. Sprinkle in some arpeggios, a dash of dissonance here and there... Hopefully this helps out.

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If you have the chance, could you review my edit to Eclipsed?
Attachments:
Around the corner (D2BII Edit).gp5
#3
shit haha i just realized i never added any strings/ambience to this. but i dig the direction you were going for, especially the descending arpeggios. ill have to incorporate something like that
#4
I often don't have much to say these days but it's prolly the best song you've written so far, so greatest of jobs братан.
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#5
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I often don't have much to say these days but it's prolly the best song you've written so far, so greatest of jobs братан.

haha thanks man, that means a lot coming from an excellent musician like you. you know ive taken that custom tuning of yours and written a few songs. you should check them out, i think youd be proud