Intro guitar riff is very good, and so are the vocals. The guitars at 1:02 could be tighter (on the intro too), unless you added delay on purpose. Other than that: if this is rough, then I want to hear your polished sound! Electric bass is nice, sometimes I wanted it a bit louder. Cool song! I don't think it would take much work to make it radio worthy. Please review my music at this link:

Last edited by aaron aardvark at Feb 16, 2016,
Great track, especially if you consider this "rough". Well layered, and builds nicely. The intro starts off very quietly, and the guitar comes in a bit abruptly. I like the feel of the vocals, although I feel like sometimes they could use a bit more- maybe some harmonies at the more intense parts? Really liked it overall though.

demo is always gonna be a demo rough or not. it has potential! im interested to hear what you take from it an add on it has everything to be a real good tune hopeful to hear any updates on it. I would like to hear harmonies vocally on some of these parts for sure keep it up keep us posted...c4c?
Last edited by Distortionx100 at Feb 22, 2016,