#2
Hey man,

The vocals are a little quiet in the beginning, so it may be an idea to bump it up a little in the mix. Also I feel like you sped up a little in the first verse, that can kinda put a listener off unless its part of the structure. The guitar playing is nice, the singing is a little quiet, lyrics arent bad. Keep writing yo

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#4
Agreed the beginning vocals are a bit quiet. The song could develop and build more, it stays pretty constant in terms of intensity and tension. Some instrumentation other than just the acoustic, or even a second guitar track if that's all you have would be nice. I'm kind of feeling a string arrangement for this, but you probably don't have access to that. A few light guitar riffs would help layer it. Other than that, its a solid track.

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