#1
Maladapted
Unconcerned
Disconnected
Aphoristic

Preconceptions hang from my skin
Little needles swinging around
Impregnating everything.

Solipsistic,
Rootless,
Nomadic

But I never miss a thing
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#2
I'm going to pull out the dictionary and get back to you.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#3
Okay I'll be here.
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#4
I think this needs a few more words.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#5
I kind of wish there was an intro "establish the character" kind of stanza to it. That way the rest would have something concrete to latch on to and give rise to some mental image. Otherwise, good stuff
OBEY THE MIGHTY SHITKICKER
#6
It feels like all the people I used to read and who I've continued to read without acknowledging over the years have really struggled with feeling apathetic. Maybe I'm reading into things too much. But it seems this is a good place to spew when you feel like you ought to be feeling something.

Maybe I'm projecting