Just throwing it up to see if any opinions or constructive criticism sticks. For music but probably works just fine regardless/as a poem, idk, the music is disjointed weird shit, hope some of you enjoy it

dragged the teeth of her comb along my back
leaving pink lines like dae-su notches
all fifteen
all twenty three
she said,
"what's under your nails?"
"dirt, maybe ink"
rolled over and said "try to get some sleep"

all of my dreams are ghosts
stretching at seams under ivory overcoats
and she could've been alive
but it happens to me
all the time

i wish my blood wouldn't clot
wish it'd spray like 80s action movies
gather in tenenbaum puddles
leaving porcelain tattoos

i never meant for it
never meant a single hurt