#2
Sounds very 80's, but good 80's like The Cure. I love the vibe you're going for, nice album art too btw. I love the transitions, I'd maybe add more to keep it fresh. I like the production quality. The drone in the background as a constant is something I love to hear in this kind of music. I love the section around 2:20, I'd maybe drag the final note out more but that's just my preference bro.
Overall great work, the song achieved what it set out to do, I'd love to hear more in the future.

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