#2
I can understand what you were trying to do. I think drums and bass would help this song achieve some sort of fullness. I felt like this song lacked any structure im not trying to dog you at all man. this was a cool expirement but it lacked in quality you have skill obviously keep it up and youll achieve whatever it is you want musically
c4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1697689