#1
Hey guys! Would really appreciate it if you would check out this Sunny-ish improvisation. I would love some critique, and tips on how I can improve my playing. I will C4C, and I am looking forward to hearing your tracks as well.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gjKw1j_gcAg
Gear:
2011 Fender American Standard Stratocaster
2012 Tanglewood TW170

Boss Katana 100w 1x112
Line 6 HD500
#3
you have a really good command of the minor pentatonic sound. i might be off base here but i don't really hear you following the chords except when you're paraphrasing the melody. i don't think you outline the Bm7b5 E7 Am change or the Bb7 chord. maybe you could incorporate 2-5s into your practice routine? since sunny is almost entirely based around the major 2-5-1 in F and the minor 2-5-1 in A. it's something i need to work on too your melodic and rhythmic sense is great though. if you want to stay mostly in the minor pentatonic you could try that scott henderson thing where he superimposes other minor pentatonics on to emphasize the 9 or 11

c4c:https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1697869
#4
Thanks for the crit! Bumping this in the hope of more responses
Gear:
2011 Fender American Standard Stratocaster
2012 Tanglewood TW170

Boss Katana 100w 1x112
Line 6 HD500
#6
Bumping this in hopes of getting some more critique
Gear:
2011 Fender American Standard Stratocaster
2012 Tanglewood TW170

Boss Katana 100w 1x112
Line 6 HD500
#7
Bumping this yet again! Three months since last time, so I guess it's legit
Gear:
2011 Fender American Standard Stratocaster
2012 Tanglewood TW170

Boss Katana 100w 1x112
Line 6 HD500
#8
Hi !
I've listened through, trying to learn some new lick from you :-) I think you've got som very nice chops there, excellent attack and melodic sense.
..a little bit repetitive, but with that backingtrack (no dynamics whatsoever) you managed to bring life into it. Well done !
It gets very interesting when you really go for the aggressive parts and the notes fly, that's what makes me want to play the guitar myself.
I can't think of any good advices for you, other than perhaps incorporating some octaveplaying to fatten some parts, (ala George Benson ) Yeah, that's easy ;-)
That is because of the song itself/backing and the repeating themes/chords.

Feel free to give your opinion on my latest, it's here, it's Norwegian, ;-) , it's probably not your kind of music, but anyway :-)
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1705641
#9
Dude this is really good. I actually think your tone choice was great. Its got such a jazzy feel thats really good. I always try to find something to criticize so my feedback is useful but I'm having trouble finding anything I would change. I can usually comment on the mix quality but this is clearly just an improv so I can tell effort was not put into mixing it properly, thats fine for what this is. If you have anything thats fully produced I'd be glad to comment on that as well.

If you could please comment on any of my backing tracks, with you skills maybe you'd like to record a solo over one of them I'd love to hear something like that.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC-VtqS6yGfp3cwNUQ75HPlg