#2
The drums definitely have that pop vibe, first thing i noticed is that everything sounds very "mono". now the distorted bass and vocals are fine in mono but maybe try and have two guitars playing (one panned left and one panned right) and the drums could have hi-hat left speaker, one crash symbols could be on left speaker and another crash could be on right (hard to explain) just to give it a fuller sound, just an idea, cool track!