#2
The word 'take' twice in the same line is clumsy. Writing about not wanting to write almost never seems to come off as fourth wall as I want when I'd tried it, I think you might have the same struggle here.
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#3
Quote by JustRooster
The word 'take' twice in the same line is clumsy. Writing about not wanting to write almost never seems to come off as fourth wall as I want when I'd tried it, I think you might have the same struggle here.


Who doesn't?

I can relate to my perceived bitter tone in this.
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