#1
Hi UG,

I've been posting a lot here lately and I'm going to continue by sharing another new song of mine. This is part of an experiment to step out of my comfort zone and stop writing only emo space-rock songs. This track is completely electronic. I really have no words to describe it, so check it out, and I hope you enjoy. Feel free to comment and ask questions :]

https://amateurchemist.bandcamp.com/track/she-seems-so
#2
Well, it's not really my type of music, I have no idea about synth melodies so I can't comment on that.

It's not a bad track to my ear though, it feels well produced, the only thing I think need a bit of fixing on this track are the vocals, especially the beginning, maybe try to sing to sing that with a firm voice, sometimes the vocals feel out of pitch but you could easily fix that with a little pitch correction.

Other than that it's good for me!