I really liked the intro (I'm a sucker for delay/reverb heavy cleans). The rhythm guitars sounded a bit muddy and I had trouble distinguishing certain leads here and there. The drums sounded tight although they were a bit loud/overpowering at times. The music was cool, I liked the relaxed vibe it had, something fairly uncommon in metal.
Bass-drum and the snare are really in-your-face. I can hardly hear the cymbals with my studio monitors. Drums are very clear, but the guitar tracks seem to not bind to the drums as the guitars are a bit muddy.

As a composition this is really original and I liked it.