#1
Hello, I would like to hear what do you guys think about this song (which is not finished yet) and also get an advice about what to do after the breakdown.
Thank you
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#2
If I hadn't known it was yours, I'd say it was the average Amorphis song. Take that for what you want I guess cuz tbh, Amorphis aint even bad.

The breakdown is just sort of begging for a transition to a solo. Do it bass, rhythm guitar drums for first 4 bars, then bring in the orchestra for the next 4, nice and sweet, then bring in a weighty, melodic bridge with massive chords, transition that into the chorus then outro. (just an idea though)

Solo idea came from this (@2:50):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ek5nDHJpkI
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